Apart from these chronological period, I, of course, have some hobbies.For example, I do love cycling so much. That has been a passion for me since the childhood. Every year, i always take trips with my bike for a few kilometers with my friends. Moreover, i like travelling. I generally prefer organizing trips by myself. For example last year, i organized a trip to Giresun, Trabzon and Rize. I arranged all routes, destinations and accommodations. Lastly, i started a new TV serie whose name is SUITS. After i had met that TV series, it affected me deeply. Before that serie, I have never been a fan of a fictional characther. I strongly advise everyone to watch it.
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Hi, Halilcan. Your ideas are expressed in a coherent language and manner. You use transitions very well. You haven’t used any irrelevant sentences. In general, your reflection is written in a very grammatically correct manner, and it has a fluent language to it. However, you seem to have a few minor problems with some grammatical use. First of all, before dates “on” should be used instead of “in”. Secondly, while talking about past experiences that were before past events, past perfect or past simple should be used: “Until last year, I had never left my hometown for any purposes”. Thirdly, instead saying “I had a lot of friends”, you could use the phrase “make friends” since it suggests you are still friend with those you have mentioned. Fourthly, “since childhood” is more appropriate than inserting a definite article in between. Fifthly, there is no such a word as “serie” but “series”, which you probably meant. As for punctuation, other than the fact that you didn’t put spaces after a few full stops, there seems to be no problem. Your only mistake in spelling is not capitalizing some “i”s, in the meaning of the first person singular.
YanıtlaSilMy question to you is the following: Would you enter prep school if you were admitted to METU again?