I chose a TV serial "SUITS"
for this reflection task. This has been my favourite TV serial since i met
it.This is about a firm which is full of lawyers. The firm only hires the best
lawyers and they never tolerate failure. In order to maintain your position and
get promotion you should be the best, professional and very stable in your
statistics. It indicates that business life requires strict professionalism,
and there is no mercy. No matter how clever you are or hardworking, unless you
are a professional, you cannot maintain your position. In this TV serial,
according to my opinion, the scenarist wants to show us that he is agree with
these terms. However, he also thinks that you should carry a piece of humanity
deep inside of you. Otherwise, these working conditions will inevitably defeat
you. You cannot stand for the all obstacles alone. You need some fellows nearby
you. One day you will be the one who are defeated and on that day,
you must probably seek help. The only ones standing nearby you are your
friends your workmates who are your second family. I totally agree with the
scenarists' point of view. To conclude, this characters and serial are a good
example for the all people watching it.
Dear Halilcan;
YanıtlaSilI read your paragraph and I really like it. I heard about this TV serial before but I did not have a chance to watch it. After reading your paragraph I decide to watch it for sure. Now let’s talk about your paragraph. Firstly, your organization and content is really good and I think you did well while reading this. And grammatically, I found little mistakes. The sentence starting with the only ones has one unnecessarily used ‘the’ after verb but I do not think this is an important mistake. To sum up your paragraph is really good and I enjoyed while reading it. Thank you for writing this lovely paragraph.
Dear Halilcan,
YanıtlaSilYou chose a good topic for your task. I watched some episodes of Suits, I actually loved it. It is both funny and didactic. Your paragraph is really good. Your organization and vocabulary are really good. You explained the serial perfectly. After reading your paragraph, I understood that I did not look at Suits that way. You helped me gain a new aspect to Suits. When I watch this again, I consider the point of view that you talked about. Thank you for sharing such a good serial with us :)